This was simply a beautiful poem.

Beautiful indeed. Lovely imagery, deep meaning, I love it.

thank you for the comment, dear.

xxx

Awwww rainy! this was a sweet poem..i remmeber those old innocent times...then we discover the cruel reality of life...*sighss... oh well, maybe one day we will frolic and play like lil kids again...even if we have to wait till we're in heaven. Oh hey, btw, if u still have my phone # go ahead n call me k? We gotta tlak soon. I still have the saved message you sent me lol. (if u lost me #, then just tell me n i'll email it to u=)))
ur twin, weepin wolfy

I miss that, i miss my free use of my imagination, sigh

Wonderfully captured indeed. Truly well done.

Beautiful..i love it ...excellent!!!!...5/5

could you plz read maybe..."Kids of today"

thnx

Wow this is really really good, def 5/5. Your language is quite mature for your age. I can relate to this alot, except I still act like a kid more than I need to, just because I can. LOL.

This is really...amazing! usually i dont like poems that dont rhyme this much. But this one really touched me..Great job...~Rach

His is very good, It's tragic when children loose their "wonder" good job.

Wow
that has to affect anyone and everyone.
beautiful piece
5/5
thanks for entering my comp
emma

Wow, you are very descriptive with your poetry, and this speaks with a lot of wisdom. I loved it, great imagery, very flowy. 5/5!

Allanah