Your who i want

by BloodScars   Sep 4, 2005


From the first day i saw you
to the day i realized it
from the day i told them who i liked
to the day i made that last slit

you treat me the way
i want to be treated
i don't care who you are
i just know this will be completed

I'm the only one
who knows you as well as i do
my friends say i can do better
but i know what we have is true

your the only one
i feel whole with
where i can say anything in the world
and you wont judge

you will be there for me
till i know what i want to do
you'll understand and not ask questions
the one i want is you

i hold it against myself
if your not with me
i talk to u more than anyone
why cant they see

they don't know who you are
so the judge without knowing
but i love you and nothings going to change
i don't care who knows

I'm sticking with you
till i get broken
i know you wont hurt me
you wont hurt anyone

your who i deserve
your who i would do anything for
i cant get away from you
theres nothing more

you make me feel complete
like I'm a part of you
your rare to find
and I'm going to hold onto

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  • 18 years ago

    by sexy emmsy

    Aww thats really sweet

  • 18 years ago

    by ..::.alreadyGoNe..::.

    -_- hey courtney...if you say ur not in love wit this one dude in like 2 days I WILL SMACK YOU! YOU ARE IN LOVE MY FRIEND! REJOICE IN IT! muhahahaha....sorry hinkle is YOURS

  • 18 years ago

    by matt white

    Where i can say anything in the world
    and you wont judge
    and
    your rare to find
    and I'm going to hold onto
    can be written better fror example just one word on each
    where i can say anything in the world
    and you wont judge IT
    and
    your rare to find
    and I'm going to hold onto you
    still a great poem though

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    I liked the message... there were some technical errors (spelling and punctuation) but there is definately some potential. great work, keep it up. 5/5, great effectiveness~

    Car