Heart felt suiside

by Broken Soul   Sep 5, 2005


He was just another guy in life
a new age typical teen
that chose to take his life
because a girl was being mean
They were dating for quite a while
Until he made that mistake
that tore apart her poor life
but thats the choice he chose to make.
Calling her at midnight and more
making tears fall with every lie
She finally had enough of that
she made him want to die
He left a note under his pillow
holding her picture in his hand
Took his life with a gun
thats something she didn't plan
In that note there was a story
of how that girl had changed his life
and how he wanted to feel her pain
He cut his arms and legs with a knife.
She got that call around midnight
she couldn't believe what she had heard
Her chest became real heavy
and her vision became blurred
All of the pain I was feeling
was nothing compared to his
I made someone hate life so much
he finally chose not to live.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Christine

    It was really a good poem. Very powerful. If you get a chance check out mine.