Chris,
there's something about your poems...that makes the very unique. I love the honesty in the way that you write things about...This poem's just so true, you just never know whats next on life...really good poem 5/5 Take care and keep writing!

~*WoW...that was really great i love ur work you've got alot of talent, and thx so much 4 votin on my peom belive it or not it meant alot....well great work 5/5*~ XoXo

**I loved it Chris, You are great. Youre poems are full of so much emotion and though* =) hope to get to know you!

I can see faith in this poem
something which i dearly lack
whats to say that there will aways be someone there for you, to pull you through?
i disagree here, i have been scorn too many times to believe that.
aside from that this poem is great.
the structure really suits the position of a storm.
i short lines and sentances make the reader reace through the poem. kinda like a storm

good work!!!!

**smile**