Excellent idea behind the poem, but at times it seems that you are trying to rhyme too much.
BUT... good work.

Jen x

Hey hon!!!
aww thanx for the comment on my poem...ur really sweet. hey i like this, i don't think it would matter if it is a good poem or not, just the fact that u have the ability to see the end and to move on is awesome. im srry for ur losses but hey, great poem. i luv reading em.
love always,
*rach

Awwwww aaron,
Its a great poem, good luck sweetie. You're a greater poet than I am though. Keep it up and Call me sometime!!!!!!1

Love ya
Kala

Wow again WOW i dont have guts to do that and well WOW

Awww, Aaron... that's an awesome goodbye poem... Keep ur chin up... I know life's rough sometimes... and love is harder... but we just gotta have a lil faith and be willing to give it one last shot.
Love always,
Your bestestest friend ~BJ~ hehe