Comments : A Prayer Before Sleeping

  • 18 years ago

    by sami

    Great job i loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*fallinNlove*~

    Aww that was so sweet I love it and think u are a great writer. Keep it up. I hope u find ur prayer girl

  • 18 years ago

    by blackheartinlove

    Beautiful poem, i'm glad there are men like you out there. You really know how to make a girl smile. One of the best poetry i've read in while. Congradulations, amazing work.

    -blackheartinlove; xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Sw33tLaDy

    That is so good and so sweet

  • 18 years ago

    by donnyelle fenton

    I really love your poem and i hope you find that ture someone that you are looking for 5/5 keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha klukas

    This is everything i do for ma man except i wish ma boyfriend would see i care just like this poem it fits perfect...ur good...keep writing.....keep ur head up

  • 18 years ago

    by jessica

    YOU ARE NOT LIKE THE REST OF THE GUYS AND YOU SHOULD BE PROUD OF THAT.KEEP IT THAT WAY .THIS WAS SUCH A GREAT POEM (YOU ARE TALENTED)

  • 18 years ago

    by ThugPoet

    Hahahaha SIMPLY GENIOUS!!!LOL I LOVED IT ....5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Misz Luving You

    Matthew that poem was great its so touching. wish there were more guys out there that think like you. great poem i loved it
    ~mariana~

  • Breath taking and sweet. i pray that you have or that you'll find the girl that you have written about in this poem. amazing work. keep it up

    cs

  • 18 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Wow that was amazing! another kickass poem!! ur extreamly good at writting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    stay chill
    lizz

  • 18 years ago

    by Testimony

    WOW!! Standing ovasion. hahaha!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*♥TLM4eVa♥*~

    Omg thts so sweet!! i love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by roseanna

    Beautifully written. You added sort of a modern tone to the poem, which is cool. I think I'm that woman you're talking about, lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    I am spechless that was such a good poem. There are ladies like that out there and I hope you get lucky enough to find one. Your talent is greater than any kind words I could give you. 5/5 for sure. Check out some more of ma poems if you get a chance. I would love some tips on improving.

  • 18 years ago

    by .....Luba.....

    I wrote a poem in response check it out plz it's called Prayer Answered

  • 18 years ago

    by adele

    I love the way that you right, i am falling in love with the image that you present.
    please don't ever change
    AW

  • 18 years ago

    by Unbreakable

    That's one of the best prayers i've heard. If it hasn't been answered already, i hope it does soon.

  • 18 years ago

    by creasy

    Awww that was really sweet. nicely written. Excellent job keep it up! take care. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very nicely done Matt and what a girl!!!