Best Friend You Will Ever Find (Cool Pattern!)

by Liquid Dreams   Sep 14, 2005


*I wanted to try something new, so the pattern of this poem is where the first two lines have 3 words, and the last two lines have 4 words in each verse thingy. Please vote and comment! Thanks!

She was alone
She was afraid
No one had heard
The part she played

She was broken
She was torn
Her soul was crushed
Her heart was worn

Not one understood
No one tried
This girl was hurt
Her eyes, they cried

Made fun of...
Was talked about...
This girl was bawling
And needed to shout

Kept in instead
She is strong
This girl is brave
But needs help along

Fighting the battle
Running the race
This girl takes it
Tears on her face

She is beautiful
She is kind
She is the best friend
You will ever find

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Sweet peom. i love it :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Sara

    Very good poem, love the new format!

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Wow amazing poem i love your flow. i was pus toghter well keep up the good work 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Hopelessly.Devoted

    Thats a really great poem
    well done

    xXvikkiXx