Reality (Acronym)

I like how you rhyme on this one and Acrostic is one of my favourite form of poetry..

a very sad piece with a tragic ending.. poor girl :(

Gel

I think Nik said it all.
All I can say though is I like how you rhyme this because usually these forms are not rhymed so well done on that.
Em

Ragged girl sprawled on the ground

*I like that you said "sprawled" I don't see that word used much.*

Each sad tear comes running down

*Instead of "running" I'd say something like falling or streaming maybe even pouring. Running seems weird in this context*

All truth she knew was ripped away

*This line didn't sound write when I read it. Maybe and "the" before "truth" so that it'll flow better.*

Lies she heard had led her astray

*Had should be have. Since you already said heard and led we know it's past tense, saying had just makes it sound weird*

Innocent girl is now broken hearted
Too many times her true love had departed

*same thing here had should be have*

Young girl left to die alone.

*I really liked this poem. I felt the emotional content was very deep and profound. Keep writing :] -Nik*