Drunk drivers

by VYXSIN   Sep 14, 2005


Crushed by your soft touch
melted by your smile
havent seen you
not for a while

questions asked about me
i sink into my chair
i look into your deep blue eyes
and play with your hair

you sit beside in every class
holding hands and hugs
good-bye kisses
nothing bugs

love is what i used to know
now its more than love
i dream of you your flying high
now your up above

two head lights
and a toot of a horn
i really miss you
my heat is torn

stupid drunk drivers
took you away
they\'re taken to court
but still need to pay

baby i miss you
please come back
i think of you all the time
im tired i think i might hit the sack

bawl my eyes out
i think of you and i
babe i can here you
\"please dont cry\"

come back to love me
i loved you so
honey i miss you
as if you dont know

bloody drunk drivers
hit you that night
i was sure you could do it
you could get back and fight

but guess what hun?
babe im back in the game
getting drunk is fun
yeah im insane!

going home that night
drunk as a driver
i hit a guy
he to wasnt a survivor

im going to court
for driving drunk
risk going to jail
i wanted to feel like a punk

reality hit me
and so did a car
the driver was his girlfriend
she was left with a scar

now we are together
for ever we stay
no cars up here
nothing to say

when reality kicks in
it does it hard
headstone payed for
with my credit card

i tried not to give up
but i knew where you are
we are just the same
hit by a car.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This has brought tears to my eyes...if there's one thing that always gets to me it's drunk drivers as I lost a friend to one a while back..

    I loved how you did it from different perspectives in this piece, I found that original and creative, and it made for a very good read.

    Despite being filled with so much melancholy and heartbreak, this was still wonderfully written.

  • 17 years ago

    by TeAr dROp

    Aww this is so sad(tears)...its vrey good i like your style! will i like is line right here it touch me

    *two head lights
    and a toot of a horn
    i really miss you
    my heat is torn*

    keep up the good work!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tipycal Bully

    Sad, i love it your so talented and all, i really really like your poems

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow!
    I LOVED this!
    This was so realistic, and sad.
    I enjoyed the flow, and the imagery was great.
    It almost made me cry.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    Deep poem.. amazing lyrics, very realistic + great msg..
    well done,keep it up!