Take A Deeper Look

by David Wallace   Sep 14, 2005


Take a deeper look into a poet's heart plagued by scrutiny all his young life.Take a voyage through the middle of my chest and try to seek what so many have sought after.

Mystical illusions peaking in and out that highlights my sympathy for the human heart appears briefly than run astray and remain hidden and for some odd reason may never become visible again.

You see it's meant to neglect pain for I have been hurt so many times A mathematician my lose count.My hard and rough exterior that I represent doesn't truly bring to the front lines what my interior make up truly have 2 offer.

I myself is a compassionate charismatic soul who chose not to let it appear because life 4 me becomes more apparent 2 me that I am meant to stay in a child's place.I feel like maybe my life is a big counsel meeting and my voice is 2 pure 2 be heard.

So I hold my tongue and strangle my vocal cords in order 4 people's selfish illusions 2 stay intact.They choose to remain blind when my words is all that is needed to open soar eyes and thaw the roughest of beings.Please take a deeper long into a poet's heart and please take into account my entire being for even if one of the minimal details is left abandoned you will lose sight of who I am.

Take a deeper long and be different and touch my tortured heart and tell me something that I don't know myself.For if such a feat is accomplished I commend you for you know me better than I know myself.You looked deeper than I did and fully unfolded this poet's heart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fluffy

    "For if such a fear is accomplished I amend you for you know me better than I know myself. You looked deeper than I did and fully unfolded this poet's heart. "

    Brilliant. A very effective & flowing story was explained throughout this piece. You have expressed concealed thoughts almost everyone has encountered; and you do this excellently. In order to improve, I would suggest structuring the poem into stanzas (it is far easier to understand when reading the first time round). Other than that, it was a beautiful write!
    Very well done, David :)

    God bless,
    -Elysium.

    P.S: Thank you very much for your latest comments, I really appreciate it! =].x

  • 18 years ago

    by Jolene

    You keep describing my life......

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexi

    Hey hun ur poem is realli great, u have real talent. keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    Sorry it's

    u're very talented****

    XD

    byebye ^^

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    Whoa hey it's awesome!
    i loved the last sentence:
    "You looked deeper than I did and fully unfolded this poet's heart"
    it's so beautiful and original.
    u've r very talented.
    take care.

    adios!

    pili.