One Try

by Rachel   Sep 14, 2005


All you want and need,
from that one guy,
that you absolutely adore,
Is just one try.

His smile is like a star,
So brilliant and bright,
That whenever you see it,
you happy until night.

That grin of his,
makes you want him even more,
Every time you see it,
You fall in love even more.

The way he walks,
with such strides,
you wonder if he hears,
your lonesome cries.

You know you could,
make him love you,
like you love him,
and never make him blue.

You only wish,
He'd hold your stare,
One second longer,
To see that you care.

As you dream and wish,
you glance and see a guy,
But you go back to your thoughts,
while he wishes you'd give him a try.

Hey! How'd u like it? Plz vote and comment and ill do the same for you! much appreciated!~Rach

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  • Hey I think this poem is really good. Thanks for the comment on my poem.. good job...5/5
    xoxoxo,
    Crystal

  • I think this poem is good....good job..5/5.
    keep writing...and comment on more of my poems if you can I always comment back asap..
    Crystal

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*angel_tears~*

    Your poem is actually better than mines!!this is a great poem.i loved!!this really is a 5/5 poem =)!!i hope u dont mind if i added you to my favorites!!!!you a good poet!!alright i wrote 2 much sorry!!=) thanx 4 your comment it meant a lot

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany01

    Awesome and cute poem it was so sweet and good 5/5

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