Loving you

by Rachel   Sep 27, 2005


I love to listen to you talk,
as you open up to me,
expressing what your feeling,
and everything you see.

I love they way you listen,
and how i know you understand,
everything I'm mumbling,
and help me through it with your hand.

I love how you give me advice,
and tell what or not to do,
You always make me fell better,
and help me pursue.

I love the way you help me,
Whether is night or day,
your always there,
every step of the way.

I love the way you make me smile,
and make me glow with delight,
You take away my fears,
and make everything alright.

I love everything about you,
And you'll always be my Friend,
I guess what i cant accept,
Is that i will love you forever and always till the end.

How'd i do? vote and comment please! I appreciate it. Thanks~Rach

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  • 18 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    Hey Rachel,
    you're right this is like mine, but i guess it's nice to know there's people out there going through the same stuff as you. But I really loved this poem it captures the feelings so well. I can relate so much, as you probably know. It was really good, I can't really say much else other than I'm always here if you want to talk.
    ~As Always,
    Left_2_Die
    ~aKa: Sierra~

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*angel_tears~*

    Hey your poem is cute gurl =)!!this is a poem 2 understand how good friendz get their place!!

  • 18 years ago

    by inlovexinpain

    Hi. I love this poem... it explains EXACTLY what I have been feeling. comment back
    ~Shelby Lynn~