Really good, I like how you formatted this poem. 5/5

Aw...i feel so bad...heart break is horrible....5/5 good write flowwed nicley

I hate guys like that..this poem is true too. excellent job
btw in your title its tragic.

So much emotion! i loved it! the only problem is in your title, 'Trajic' should be 'tradgic'. 5/5

O my god....this must be the best thing that i read in a veryyyy long time...i know i was only supposed to read 3 but i can't help myself...this just cought my eye...5/5 once again

So true - I thought the rhyming pattern/structure of the poem worked so well . . it really gave the poem a great flow. I can relate to this poem - and it always makes the poem about ten times better when you can, thing is, I don't think this poem could get any better - yet alone by ten times!!

Peace. [Sole]

That was good i could really relate