Hey, it's so good that i keep reading it over and over and over again. i love this part especially

i love you dear heart,
i always will,
i will remember all you have taught me,
i will remember to try and smile.

If he knows it, he will be so relief, that you won't be sad and will always carry a happy face.

It's very touching and sad but nice at the same time. 5/5. Thanks for your comment by the way, and you know what, i think i'll read it another time.

Wow...what could i say? really cool poem, really unique and sweet! Nice job 5/5 take care an dthank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us.

Oh Aylee your brave and strong! Its a wonderful poem and im sure Reggie will love it! Did he hear it? Read it to him ok!

I hope your not tooo upset darl, smile ok! Be happy and treasure those memories he gave you! Secrets of your heart!

If you need me im here.

AmY

Very nicely written. 5/5 none to less.
Keep writing and take care [always]

xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Thanks heaps guys, this poem is close to the heart and it means a lot to get your praise.
amz hun: i didnt get a chance to read it to him, i never got the chance he went downhill too quickly.
but im sure hes reading over my shoulder now, so he knows.
he did in the first place.

much love to you all,
thanks again for your commentos.
mwahh.aylz

Hahaha there i go repeating myself. ahh im strange, arent we all.

I liked the poem... but your rite it didnt reallie make sense to me lol. But i still liked it just work on your flow. nice job xox.

Haha, read it again...hee...well, still cool...