Damn im in love lol

by rob   Sep 15, 2005


Fallin in love wit u was never part of my plan but once i got to know u i wanted to be ya man be the one to show u the love u desire baby i neva gave u da reason to call me a liar been there for u on all those nites cant tell u how many times u saved me from fights i gave up my knife and dont carry a glock all for u baby we\'d be chillin on my block never ment to hurt u but i have in the past wanna make this work and make it last my love for u is true and nothin will change that wishin my lap was where u sat with my arms around u holdin you all nite watch the sun go down with u what a beauitful sight i dont know whats betta the sunset or ya eyes would love to be there until da sun rise wipe the tears from ur eyes when u cry talkin all nite all nite and never say bye fall asleep together on da phone and say good morning u the kinda girl that takes alotta earning even tho i dont know how u feel anymore wishin we can talk and open up the door to this relationship of love and make this work cuz to u ill never be a jerk i love u too much to ever let u down ud make me sad jus by makin me see u frown

yo yall coming up here soo comment on dis stuff get at me tell me watchu think

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  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    I hope this post works as planned...lol

    Fallin in love wit u was never part of my plan
    but once i got to know u i wanted to be ya man
    be the one to show u the love u desire
    baby i neva gave u da reason to call me a liar
    been there for u on all those nites
    cant tell u how many times u saved me from fights
    i gave up my knife and dont carry a glock
    all for u baby we'd be chillin on my block

    I broke down some of your lines into a stanza or replica anyways...lol
    I think if you were to present your poem formatted it would be eaiser to read and more ppl mught be willing to r/r/c.
    It cleans up the flow a lil and make for a more enjoyable read. Hope it helps!!
    You do have a unique way of expressing yourself!

  • 18 years ago

    by XxCrazy4youxX

    ~*Aww that was like the sweetest thing i've ever read....really....aww...lol srry but yea it was really good i loved it keep up the great work 5++*~ XoXo

  • 18 years ago

    by Leona

    Nice i like it alot you have talen

  • 18 years ago

    by Green M&M

    Thats tight i think its great wow nice job