LOOK

by brittany   Sep 16, 2005


If you look deep into my eyes
You can see what secrets I hide,
And if I'm lying.
You well see how I feel at that very moment,
You will see all my hopes and dreams
For the future,
You will see my greatest desire
You will see whats in my heart,
And you will be able to tell my heart
Belongs to you.
And if you look into my
Eyes long enough you
Will be able to see into my sole
And you will see I can never
Love another as I love you
Because you have my
Heart and sole and always will
So next time you see
Me baby look deep
Into my eyes and tell me
What you see.
Because eyes can tell
You everything you want know
And so much more.

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  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I put you in my favorites. Now I got you, lol. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by kareeenuhhh

    Cute

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Its nice to see happy poems, not as entertaining but hey none the less nice to see...i like this poem however lol I just took a class on creativity today and this is kinda boring to tell you the truth its ordinary its all been said before.......i cant say im all that exciting.....but i think the idea is worn out and you should spice it up instead of stating it out plain so im going to give this a 3/5 because with such a basic idea more powerful words and better metaphors and what not are needed and it simply wasn't exellent or good it was fair though....

    keep it up i think you can do better

  • 18 years ago

    by LaDy eL LiViN iT SiNGLE

    Dang dat was a really good poem..i liked it..hey thnx 4 commenting my poem..oh yea n i rate this a 5 soo yea...well keep up da good work k?..bye!!!
    ~ShOrTy~

  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Awwww, that's so cute... you can really tell that you TRULY love this guy

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