Wow nice job hun i like it 5/5 xox

Hmmm... Interesting! Nice job & very well written! Who is the lady... By the way!

Beautiful ipsita just amazing, i like the way you narrate this poem as if telling story.

I suck at commenting, but nice job =) i liked it much, made me smile. inner beauty mm hmm

Well a very maturish poem and well written and presented.
Good write.
Thanx for the comments on my poem , yeah Im an Indian and I just have ,at least for now, one favour to ask of u..pls read my Poem "For you My Love" ..its kinda big but pls bear thru it..I blv thts its the best poem i hav written to date..pls let me know wht u feel abt it.
Im anxiously waiting for ur comments :)
Take Care,
Rakesh.

Ok...so when u talk abt she...its u
but tell me abt "he"??

unique work...very diff from what i hv been reading in this site.

great work...asusual

Makes me think a bit >.>... but i guess.. looks aren't everything :) so she's pretty.. and good personality o.o... its different.. but i love it...

Very lovely..love it. 5/5.
keep up the great wrk. many ppl can relate to this.

sonam

O_o vEry nicE!!~ Love your poeMz..~ ^^ 5/5

Hey there,
Well.. oh my god another lovely poem.. it's soo sweet, it was a pleasure reading it.. All of your poems are great.. but I like this one the most..it came straight from teh heart.
Monique