The earths conscience (short)

by Lenny   Sep 17, 2005


A peach dusk lay between the shoulders of the world,
The struggling Earth
And callous Sun,
Both dependent on one another,

Like a weight on the earth,
The sun lingers
-a looming conscience to alight the sky,

Everyday the earth tries to hold up his adversary,
Attempts to delay his impending acceptance,

And each day the sun sinks into the horizon.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    You capture nature so vividly.. its like every image is picturesque and totally original.. you dont get as much views/comments as you should.. in such a little space, you painted a great sequence.. the transition between the 3rd and 4th "stanzas" seems a bit disjointed and kinda leaves me disoriented, though the poem is still good as is.. i dont really have much else to say.. good job once again..

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