Wassup this is da bomb peom. well peace out. oh and you should check mine out.

Another beautiful sweet poem...though i really didnt like the last 2 lines.....the long line then short line kinda dosnt work sorry 5/5 though

Again this is beautiful ^_^
best of luck you and Marco,

Omg this is like REALLY good i love it! 5/5 for sure! good job keep it up
Becky
xoxo

I luvd dis 1!!!
i gave u 5/5
hope everythin's going good between u & Marco!!!

Realy good.

You are so good at writing things for him i hope you showed this to him because if i got something like this id never leave that person this is amazing you are so talented i love how you can write about this kind of thing im really happy you have this in your life

something really small i think it would sound better if you put the "throw" in the last stanza 3rd line in the 4th line itd flow better

good job

5/5

Good job. one suggestion,
feelings so strong
~try Feelings oh so strong
It seems to flow better that way

*i have poem like this, it's called Love me

Sends shivers up my spine. Your love poems are so so well, there wonderful. I love them.

Very nicely written, I loved the way you conveyed the emotions. The only things I'd suggest is to maybe write 'number one' as opposed to '#1". And the second last stanza somewhat breaks the rhyme scheme, nonetheless I liked it.

Wow you are a great writer. I can only hope that some day i'll be as good as you! excelent poem! 5/5!

Nice job i hope it all works out for you 2. keep up the good girl .. 5.5 amzing

Very good.. you can feel the love in it :)

This is great, but the flow got snarrled near the end. might try revising.5/5, i felt the emotion!

Aww.. that was so sweet and i cud tell it came from the heart.. ur rhyming is gud, and ur flow isnt too bad either..
thnx 4 sharing
Nannoush

I enjoyed it although i found it a little difficult to get into the flow at times

Again, I wish I were Marco!!! I have been given 5s to all your poems, just because you are a real poet! Maybe we should d a collab? I do the XXX part, you do the real part? LOL, this poem is so amazing!

U r the WORST writer EVER!...wow that is so far frum te truth...u r fabulous. i am runnin outta stuff 2 say bcuz EVERY poem is gr8. 50000/5! too bad i cant do that...o well....keep up the gr8 work..

I think this is a really great poem. I really liked it. Keep up the good work.