Ending was weird, could use a little work, but the rest was of the hook ^_^ lol very dark roar he he ^_^

I love it, it's wonderful. Great concept.

Great writing i like this poem but i dont read many dark poems i dont like them but i like this one i give you a 5

Great work, very hooking and well written. Keep up the good work.

Noni this is a masterpiece...one by one a loved one dies...until my tears could not be cried was so stong...
lovely
keep it up !

Omg you are so talented another absolutly perfect poem...very very very good....5/5....it almost made me friggin cry

Very interesting 5/5

Wow! very interesting..its good. but just different

I love this. You're great at writing dark/sad poems very deep and emotional good job :)

I loved this again it flows perfect i think this format really works for you great job

Amazing & dark poem !!
5/5
love
amy