Omg blush, this is an amazing one! it almost made me cry..all the horrible things in life. THank god we have a place here to write em all out and release some of the agony....i've been waiting for u to write another poem, u havent written any in a while:) ***beautiful****
wolfgurl

Wow, just want you to know that I like the poem...the flow went well and it was well written...Nice job an dkeep it up 5/5 take care and great poem :-)

I just heart the way you put those words together and weave such a beautiful picture in my mind. Not talking about the death and such, but of two people who are there for each other through all the ups and downs. Nice job!

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Lovely, a great poem for a 1 year old ;) lol!!! keep it up, 5 from me!!!!

Sammi x

Wow... that was awesome great job
i loved it, one of my fav poems of all time!!! keep up the terrific work
take care
amanda

Wow.....That was a really good poem...It almost made me cry!!!!Keep up the good work! 5/5

*~Jamie~*