Nice poem i love the last part of it. we all do that sometimes. very deep 5.5

In the second thing last sentence it would go better with the poem if it was cant instead of can, and there was some forced rhyming, if you just let your emotions do the writing it would sound better, good job though

Seems to be a sincere sharing of feelings.. nice flow

I noticed some rhyming that seemed forced. but it wasnt hard to follow and it had a steady flow.

Another GREAT poem. You've earned a spot on my favorites list! Keep it up... Really. You've got a lot of talent.
-Kate

I love the title drowning is such a great word lol

but i must admit your flow is far off well done....your rhyme scheme was inconsistent as good as this and fix sound together they just dont rhyme

even though the second stanza was my favorite

with joy and happiness
but i know its my fault, i confess
*short and then long isn't the best mix there girlie girl that definatly didn't sound good together whatsoever*

i love the ideas behind your poems and word usage and flow can always be improved it gives you something to work at keep it up! ill give it a 4/5

I love the title drowning is such a great word lol

but i must admit your flow is far off well done....your rhyme scheme was inconsistent as good as this and fix sound together they just dont rhyme

even though the second stanza was my favorite

with joy and happiness
but i know its my fault, i confess
*short and then long isn't the best mix there girlie girl that definatly didn't sound good together whatsoever*

i love the ideas behind your poems and word usage and flow can always be improved it gives you something to work at keep it up! ill give it a 4/5

Love

Moving like the wind.
Blowing through the trees.
It touches every limb.
Before it turns to leave.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Don't leave the future behind!!

The meaning of the poem kinda confused me. But it was well written and did have good rhymes. keep it up!

This was good! I loved the end it brought it all together.
The flow wasn't bad but could be better, but it wasnt hard to read =)
It was a good write and you spilled your heart out well done x0x =)

I also enjoyed this one also. I mean to me it seems like the mistake was that you let him go not let you go. I mean it says it at the end of your poem ending up in your own mistake. I mean duh!! hello why didn't i see that? i guess i had to read this poem to find out. You did an amazing job once again very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

The end was good, but there was a little forced ryhming.

Good job I'd say 4/5.

Yours,
Paul xx

Good poem, not as good as your other ones. Couldn't really relate. Keep it up. *i did three poems*

Very nice poem. It sounds so touching. I'm always up for a touching poem. ^_^

VERY GOOD POEM THIS ONE WAS KINDA OF SAD YOU WROTE IT VERY WELL 5/5

Excellent poem, but i really think u shouldn't do something as rash as slitting your wrists.
what if there's more and u just happen to miss it?