My Death

by sillylittlegirl   Sep 18, 2005


My head is spinning
in this bed
I'm screaming for help
inside my head
people are saying
words I don't understand
the last thing I remember
is lying in the sand
my throat really hurts
I can barely breath
I feel I'm stuck
but somebody's watching me
Footsteps are coming
they are drawing near
then came over me a wave of fear
As my heart stops pounding
I hear a voice inside
telling me to always be brave
and hang on for life's ride

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kisa

    It's a very nice poem. The title is kinda overused but that's the best thing. When you look for a poem yours popped out because of your name too. I really like the concept. I can't seem to make my poems like that. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by dwight

    I just found out that i named a poem just the same. I like yours, would be greatfull if you would read mine too, same name but really differnet.
    dwight

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    It was going really well and I was loving it untill the end, the end just isn't right

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