what importance does that serve? can you pick this poem apart and tell me what it means or are you writing blindy things that sound cool?
and i will never be waken up.
as you kiss me for the last time.
those are my favorite lines those i think meant something real the rest of the poem is simple just ranting about cutting and suicide and i dont think thats all that important love and losing is though and i think those lines were worded well
I liked it...although, some of the rhyming did seem a little forced. but on the whole i thought it was very good considering i dont really like poems about suicide. but u r a great writer, keep it up! jesx