Wow i think that any one that ever wanted to die sould read this is so true many of us wish this but when it happens we wounder why. th ebest thing about this poem is the power it has it makes you see things in a diffrent poin i love this poem i and i so glad i make my mind to read it 5.5

This is sooooo sad....though somehow also very inspirational....i liked how it was like a story...5/5...please read mah poem "thank you"...uh..thx

Honestly moving it really was, do you write stories as well as poems? because if you don't you should you have amazing ideas the only thing that i though could make this poem any better is the last line on the first stanza i thought flowed better with each instead of every...good job

As i'm reading this, i can imagine the scenery, nice, just a poem and i think it can make into a show.

Touching !! it openned my eyes... u must read "murder or suicide" ...it'll tell u how i feel righ tnow..

Amazing, its very well written, very emotional.. you can feel what it would be like.. i can relate to this one, so many of those i loved has died.. this way too, you have great ideas, well done,

p.s. thank you for the honesty

Man that was deep,very good your an awesome writer loved that poem

Thanks so much you guys...I'm so happy everyone likes this poem...I really thought people were gonna be like wTF this is dumb...Which I woulda been like tough cookies I still love it..Thanks everyone..
Bye
Ash

The beginning was a bit confusing, but I just loved the ending, I really enjoyed reading this poem, I can relate 101 %, I tried to commit suicide a few month ago, by taking pills...and I'm still here, but yes sometimes I still wish to die....
You did an amazing job, keep up the good work!!! hope that you are ok??

*Much Love Sabrina*

Hey, i love this, it's clever it puts a whole new perspective across and i like that alot. You've written this in a powerful way.
xxx cici xxx

WOW! amazing poem. i had tears in my eyes. it reminds me of my best friends and how i promised them id be there til the day they die. i never want to leave them.
this poem made be realize that friendship is way more important that commenting suicide.
excellent 5.5

WoW that was long but def worth the read..very crative and deep..5/5

"Go till the bottles hollow."
should be 'bottle's'

And I think the title is supposed to be "your" not "you're"

There are a few places where you split up words like "without" and said "with out," but they aren't glaring grammatical mistakes.

I thought this poem had a good message, especially by the end. It is relieving to see a poem that doesn't make suicide into some noble sacrifice.

You seemed to be doing an ABCB rhyme, although in some places it didn't rhyme really well (inside/die), and in one place you rhymed the same word (be/be). But on a whole you rhymed well, and i didn't feel it interrupted your message.

This poem is very good! i think suicide is the most selfish thing that anyone could ever do. they may get away from their problems but they're hurting everyone that they love even more than they could imagine. not a lot of people realize this but if they all read this poem, then they would. very touching.
-Sam-

Wow. this is very touching. i tried to kill my self a few times but now after reading your poem, i know it was stupid. i never thought of how it would affect everyone else. very well written. 5/5
dawn

Awww, that is so sad! It only gives true meaning tot the fact that suicide is a very selfish thing! Great poem! 5/5

Hey, really amazing poem :( it almost made me cry xx

this has made me really think about what to do with me life... although i might not have a best friend... or any really close friends who understand.. i know that someone would miss me.

i love it, keep up the good work xx

This is one of the best poems i have ever read.. and im being serious.. check mine out and please rate them.. they are as followed:
YouAreThere...
Ever Since
WildcatClano5-o6

the last one is about mi hockey sesaon.. i was crying when i read it to them.. that is how much those ladies mean to me

That is such a deeply moving poem. Well done. I have recently lost a friend to suicide and I wish she could have read this, it probably would have changed her veiw on life.

Oh my god. that is amazing. *5*