Ohh...I can relate...this piece is really meaningful and deep...

I'm going to go accept your application to the Unrequited Poets club...hope to see you there...we haven't had many active members...and if you want, you can PM or IM me. Otherwise, I'll hopefully talk to you on the club's discussion boards. Oh, and thanks for taking the time and writing an application, some people say nothing...you were even polite :)

Take care, dear.

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Excellent work. 5!

Wow. I really like this poem. My favorite lines are:
"You're consumed in yourself
A consumption thats created a barrier of lies that can be pierced by no one"
These lines spoke to me because of an old relationship. Excelent poem. 5/5

~Anthony

Excellent! I like how easy this poem flows and the emotions that is popping from every words.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Wondeful done, really nice job, a great poem!!!