Cut me twice

by Katlynn   Sep 19, 2005


She bits her nails.
harder then she cuts her wrists.
she's scared of what her mom would think.
she runs away.
and leaves a note to stay.

Dear Mom,
i thought everything was going alright.
but now i hold myself tight.
when i have something to tell you.
I've been cutting.
I've been bitting my nails hard.
and I'm dieing tomorrow.
so don't worry.
it'll be OK.
love always and forever.

her mom begins to fear.
and shed some tears.
her baby is gone.
and she might be dead.
she looks all around.
the town.
doesn't find her.
she goes back home.
to call the police.
and sees her daughter.
in the hallway.
she gets closer.
her daughter is hanging.
there with blood stains of her cuts.

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  • 18 years ago

    by .

    No rhyme, choppy, yet still is good and gives you a good picture in your head of what is happening...5/5 good job
    Becky
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Sadly I have to be a broken record here. It's very chaotic. It tells the story well and contains some good imagery, but could use some work.

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Good poem but it could use a better flow to it

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    God this person above im sorry i hate people who leave silly comments like that GRR

    this poem was EXTREMLEY choppy like none of it flowed at all...this is so simply fixed though honestly take the time read it through and add 2 or 3 sentences where they need to be added

  • 18 years ago

    by danielle

    Amazing poem...lots of feeling...a little suspence

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