These days

by fallentears   Sep 20, 2005


I can't deal with this anymore
I don't know what I live for
These days are always passing me by
All I ever do is cry
I feel so empty inside
There's nothing to hide
My friends and family don't care
Strangers always stare
Maybe today is the day I should go
I can't hang around forever with this life.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Becky Karen

    Wow, that was amazing i have just got a account i was afraid of writing like that, i thought i would get missed juged.

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    It had very strong feeling, but I picked up some I's that were i's, which I think took away some of the poem's quality.
    But that is merely my thoughts. Take care.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by мσяιтυяαм

    Great! i really do like that poem
    xX velvet kisses Xx

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