I Can't Take It Anymore

by AnorexicDream   Sep 20, 2005


The knife is coming closer
and i am about to slid it across my wrist
and i will simply end my life
with the ease of a twist

i lost the only person
that cared about me
and now my life is worthless
this now i truly see

drew cheated
and he broke my heart
and now you see
my life is falling apart

my toe is broken
on crutches i must walk
and mother laughs about my cutting
everytime we talk

i wanna die more that you know
i fvcking hate my life
and now i will end it all
with my friend the knife

*i am writing to say goodbye to all of you drew cheated on me with my best friend and i kicked a cement wall and broke my big toe on my right foot and i cant take it in my house my dad is an ass and i wanna fvcking die so goodbye to all of you i love all of you and stay strong be stronger than me*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Amanda!!!! nooo, please hun, don't do it... please please hun, don't end your life. there are soo many people that love you. we care about you so much. please hun, be strong. things will get better. if i wouldn't of stuck around, I never would've lived what I have this past year. im finally happy and hun, you can be too... just give it a chance. i really hope you don't go through with this... luv u!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Alyssa's right....and i know this is my 3 time commenting on the same poem.....but i don't care....i love you and i want you to know that.....you can't leave all of us....remember what we said? when we're 18 we're getting out, we're taking a roadtrip together and leaving all the bad memories behind...you probably don't remember....but that's what we said.....you can't give up on me now.....you can't give up on all of these people who honestly do love you!

  • 18 years ago

    by alyssa

    Amanda look at all the people who commented. how can u say no one cares. theres five people right here, we all love u adn need you to stay srong, i promiss on baby brothers life if you hold on life will get better

    alyssa

  • 18 years ago

    by alyssa

    Amanda NO, you cant do this, i love you so much i care about you more then you can ever know, you need to stay strong, at least 4 me. you can do it i know you can. u said your mom teases you about cutting then prove her wrong show her you are strong and you can do it. push it in her face that she is not hurting you, even if she is. i know how you feel, but thats another reason to stay alive we can help eachother. good poem 5/5
    xoxo
    love always
    alyssa

  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    I know you're feeling lost
    and i know you feel alone
    but soon enough you'll find your way
    you'll find a place to call your home

    i don't know everything you've been through
    but i know how it feels to fall apart
    and i'm always here to listen
    i love you with all my heart

    I LOVE YOU MANDA! *GIANT bear hug*don't you EVER forget it! i'm always here for you...

    -brittnay-
    *silly bi+ch*
    ~cloudy sky~
    =Armidillo Buttkisser=
    $brittnizzle$