Aww sweetie, I`m sorry. :( what a fudgin` a.hole. this is a great poem, i luva` it almost as much as i love you. :O

This one is TOTAL awesomeness! +5!

Hey huni what happened? r u okay? if u want 2 talk 2 me send me a private message i would like 2 no what happend im so sorry and i hope ur ok, im here u, ur a great writer 5/5 check out my poems! luv ya mwahzz

Wow!! Nice rhyming... I love the anger for the person... but I am sorry too... It must take a lot to tell people that... I am very happy that you wrote the poem... It is awesome... and it makes me pissed at the person who would actually do that...
Well if you have the time please go and look at my poem called Life and maybe comment...

Brittany

This is soo sad but written so well!!!... im really sorry that happened... but im glad uv found a kind of vent... im always up for talking :)
luv always smiling oxox

It soooooo sad. makes me want to cry. i love u sooo much bj!!! i understand why u want revenge!! great poem.

Thats so sad Bj, hope it wasnt tru

LOVE lj

THAT IS SO GREAT DID THET REALY HAPPEN I LIKED AND ENJOYED THE FIRST 4 LINES VERRT MUCH

Wow BJ, I loved the poem it was good. this is a very emotional poem. Iam very sorry that, thathad to happen to you.remember if you ever need to talk iam here for you.

Love
~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

Awwww. *hugz* toomanynumbersthatidon'tknowwhatit'scalled/5 lol..
-Yingy Lingy Thingy :P

Thts so increbily sad, omg i feel so sorry for you *huggles* it was so full of emotion!!
lub becca xx

Omg b=BJ i am so sorri
take care babe i love u so much cant wait 4 u 2 cum bak online mwa mwa im here if u need 2 talk

Thats so sad... how could anyone do this to you ???
thats so mean & so rude
but i hope you'll heal & forget
5/5
god be with u
love
amy

Omg that's so sad---whoever would do that to anyone--four months old or four years old, whatever age--I just...can't believe them.. Cruelty... That's so sad.. Good expressions, 5/5, love your poems

It sounded very angry, but your anger clouded the story, and left the reader with little idea of what really DID happen that day. I thought it could have been rape, then maybe that someone accidentally threw you into a wall...?
Never mind, the poem itself was good.

Good Writing!
beth

I like it, your solid rhyme scheme and expression worked great. The only thing I might suggest is to enhance it in terms of vocabulary, use some different, more expressive words. Otherwise, I love it.

Wow...just...wow....great poem...i cant beleive that happend to you!! my parents used to beat me but i was old enough to fight back!! 5/5

Okay so i was wrong...darn lol...but even on this i get the main idea that you were beaten? but you really actually never said what happened to you other then got thrown into a wall...unless that was it and i guess being thrown at a wall when your a baby would be tramatic...but i think you should have emphasized what happened more then just the hate i get you hate them but im still not sure EXACTLY why.....4/5

You took me and threw me into that wall!
You didn’t care that I was young and small!
I was just a baby, why’d you pick me?
What did you think? That I would just say “Wee!”?

WEE lol omg i found that funny in a sad way lol sorry...but it was really good 5/5
Becky
xoxo

Awww im so sry:( gr8 poem tho! keep up the gr8 work! this poem didnt have any flaws whatsoever except i thought that the rhyme of me and wee was a bit forced. 5/5 tho!!!
~ME~