What is wrong with me?

by Chelsi   Sep 21, 2005


Confused..
Why am I so sad?
Why can't I be happy?
What is wrong with me?
I feel like a loner,
when I know I'm not.
I just don't know what to do,
or say.
I wish I was happy
really really happy.
I try to be optimistic
but all I think is pessimistic.
I try hard for other people
to like me,
but I guess I don't try hard enough.
It hurts me to know that I can't show
people the real me.
Only a few people know who that is.
I am just really confused.

**I know this isn't that good..but I would appreciate it if you would comment and vote on it.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Rose

    Hey thanks for the comment...I love this poem it reminds me so much of me....keep up the good work...5/5 great job

    Katrina Rose

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow.. i can relate to this alot.. please check out my newest poem "lonely" if you get the chance, but this one was really good, I can never show my true self to people either, only very few people, and it hurts, because I have such low self esteem, but anyways, great poem, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kendall

    Wow i am exactly like that down to every last word. great poem!

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