I can feel the electricity through the computer screen.....lol. Beautiful words, loving and passionate.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Wow bill,
Really good poem! 5/5 Sensual and cute, with lots of details and stuffs. Nice poem...I have no words, this is the first sensual poem I read so...but good poem tho. Take care and keep it up...you'd a great job. ^_^

I like this poem; very sensual and passionate. great job!

~dandy~

This one is good....bought back memories..

Wow I can definatly feel the electricity in the air for sure . Such passion !

This is a very beautiful piece. It flowed nicely with so much passion! Keep it up~Holly

Wonderful rhythm and rhyme flow, a great job!!! A sensual expression of passion!!!