Really good poem, always keep it up and can't wait to read more 5/5 great job just really sad. take care ^_^ |
by josh mills
Nice poem its really good i cant wait to read more.good luck with ur poetry i find that writing takes away the feelings u put into it,it just goes away |
This is one of your better ones also again b/c you got alot of good things to say....but your rhyming(myabe you werent atempting at rhyme in that case im sorry) and flow isnt so hot....4/5 |
by Sara
Summary of my life :( |