I thought

by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~   Sep 23, 2005


-This poem is dedicated to all of my best friend, i luv y'll, very very much.-

I thought,
No one ever cares about me,
Just like how I cared for them.

I thought,
No one ever loves me,
As much as I love them.

I thought,
No one ever thought about me,
Just like how I thought about them.

I thought,
No one ever misses me,
As mush as I miss them.

I thought,
No one really listens to me,
Like how I've listened to them.

I thought,
No one really knows,
The pain and sufferings of mine.

I thought,
No one really notice,
All the tears I've cried day and night.

I thought,
No one really sees me,
As their friend that is so true.

I thought,
No one will realize,
How much I needed them.

I thought,
No one will appreciate,
What I've done for them.

I thought,
No one will remember,
Everything I've said or done.

I thought,
No one will accept me,
For whom I truly am.

I thought,
And that's what I thought,
Until you guys prove me that I am so wrong.

(I know this poem is very common so i hope you guys out there can suggest ways to make it better. Thanks.)

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  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Beautiful poem... wow
    its so strong & touching & amazingly done !!
    5/5
    nothing less !!
    love always
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael

    This poem was different, but still as great. U said how u hought and they proved u wrong the good way! 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa Westfall

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  • 18 years ago

    by BlueKiss

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brooke

    Wow I really like that poem~ That was very nice and it was written well to me.

    Brooke

    oh and thanks for the comment on my poem it meant a lot~

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