Our Brightest Star*

by Kimberly   Sep 23, 2005


(this poem is dedicated in loving memory of my papa)

you were the mother,
the father, and
the grandfather,
you knew what to do if things
went wrong, if anyone had a question,
we could get the
right answer from you,
you were intelligent,
smart,a great cook, but
most of all LOVING!
you are no longer suffering,
cause now you have,
begun your journey.
at night I try to look for the brightest star, because I
know that will be you
looking down on me.
you will always be remembered,
and someday we can be
with you for enternal life.
it really sucks that
no one could give u their last hug, last goodbye, or their last words to you, but
we know that you are finally home, and
God knew it was time for you to go home with him and relive your life.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Hey i like your poems and i know you like mine well i hope you have time to read my other one its in SECRET LOVE and it is called I CANT GET OVER YOU. i hope you like it like i like yours well i g2g bye.

  • 18 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Hey i like your poems and i know you like mine well i hope you have time to read my other one its in SECRET LOVE and it is called I CANT GET OVER YOU. i hope you like it like i like yours well i g2g bye.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kimberly

    This comment is from the writter of the poem! ~This poem Is for my Grandpa aka ~PAPA~ he left me a note that said, "by the time you read this i would've allready started my journey and you that i loved with all my heat and i always wil. at night when you find the brightest star then that will be our star and that will be me looking donw on you. I love you, Papa" so anywhoo i am gonna go so
    ~tootoles~
    love ya lots, kimberly*

  • 18 years ago

    by michael

    And you sed i was good!!! lol
    you are good and it was really emotional.. i loved it.. even though it was sad as.. :(
    talk soon...~mickey~

  • 18 years ago

    by brooke

    Aww thats a really touching poem! keep writing ! xxoxo thanks for the comment!

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