Its gr8 i love it xXxXxXxXxXxXx

*Michelle*

Excellant poem. Keep up the great work. Luv Nicole =)

Hey i saw that your a kiwi so i thought i'd check out your stuff, great poem, i really enjoyed it. luv courtie

Really nice work. Imagery works well and your rhythm and flow is accurate.

Wowie, it's great but it so sad.

It has great flow, narration and some other stuff."

Hehe,

I'm just lazy.

Good job.

Keep up the good work.

Don't ask me why I am double spacing.

A very well written dark poem

This is a really good peice, expressive and with a great flow. the content is very good too.

5/5