More then pain!!

by Katie   Sep 25, 2005


Pain nothing like this before its like a knife cutting up the heart
trying to get over you but its kinda heard b/c u left a-lot of pain there
did u try to hurt me or something from the beginning?i kinda knew from the start
that you pulled me into a death trap!you riped my heart and.....you used a knife to cut it up in a million Pisces!

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  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    O0o that's sad and deep! ouch! amandax33

  • 18 years ago

    by Victor

    Katie

    you are very creative in a sense, but your spelling is off. I feel like you could be a better poet if you used better spelling and used appropriate words for your feelings. Try to extend your vocabulary and you sure will be a better writer. I'am not trying to down you in any way but just give you constuctive criticism. and if you want to read my poems and do the same you can! thanks!

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