Really nice !!! I like the rhyming patterns and the wording you've used.

xxx cici xxx

(Thanks for ALL your comments lol)

This flows so nicely, beautiful piece of work
-Whispre

This is good
deeper than dark

That was a very deep poem. What do you mean by it if I may ask? I would love to hear the writer inerpretting her work.

Thats so sad. 5/5

Beautifully written, well done 5/5

I'm not sure what to say on this one but i mean that in a good way..

Thx for the comments every1...

Wow a very nice poem. well done 5/5

Good poem, nicley written...
take care,
xoxoxo

Very good flowed good 5/5

I thought this was very creative and very interesting i really enjoyed reading this. I really like the ending "I split myself open and killed ME;
From the sky the innocent fell.
Now forever scarred and weary;
Im the one who broke the angel."
i like how you put "I split myself open and Killed ME" it gives you the fact after you read something about Her and stuff in your poem before you got to the conclusion you got to know who that angel was and it was YOU. Very creative. i really enjoyed reading this like i have said. keep it up. keep on writing. lvoe always and forever.

O MY GOSH! that was so good well written its like life 5/5
~*Lydia*~

As I keep reading more and more of your poems, I get more and more impressed.

My favourite lines are:

"So young and charming, full of love,
She was always soft hearted to you,
As peace full as a dove flying above
Following where the wind blew."

Especially the last line.

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(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

This was great i loved the second stanza i love these types of poems great job your one of my favorite writers on this site!!! 5/5

WOW that was a great poem. thank you for commenting on my poems greatly appreciate it. keep up the good work and live life well

candi

Wow.. that was reli gr8.. it was deep and heart-breaking.. ur rhyme was reli gud, and ur words went straight to the heart.. hope ur OK now
take care
keep going

Nice job.. the flow of the poem seemed a little off in some places.. but it was a nice poem 4.8/5 so i'll just give it a five! :-)

I really liked this poem. It was written beautifully. My favorite stanza was:

"In her hair rests a halo with a glow,
Similar to the hazel of her eyes.
Almost magical they twinkle in sorrow,
Awaiting to say her goodbyes."

Especially the last two! Good job!

Love always,
~BJ~

Your poems are so deep, i love the way they use words and phrases that you really have to think about but are pretty much flexible enough for anybody to relate to even in a very general sense. i can believe you are as young as your profile says...i wish i had your talent at your age. the angels poems is beautiful, cant wait to read your next poem XD