Really great poem hun! keep up da great work! u r on my favourites! luv maddison xxx

I've Beat You To It! Your Already On My Favs :)

Very clear and simple message; but told through a convincing and detailed description. Loved it - Loved the message - Well done.

- Kalah.

Thanks Alot Sunny *Hugs* I Personally Hated This Poem After I Wrote It, But Decided To Put It On Anyway, Your Comment Means Alot To Me Because You Put a Smile On My Face, Not Many People Can Do That...I'm Honored :) *With All My Love* xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Interesting...at first i was getting a different vibe, lyke maybe the guy killed her or something. but its still kickass! i luv this "Rippled Tears
Embraced My Crystal Face
As I Ly Hopeless
In a Web Of Death's Embrace"
BEAUTIFULNESS~!! keep it up :) you rock!! XXXXX
JL

Beautiful poem. Very inlightening meaning. Only thing with it I would say is the second to last stanza. The rhyming doesn't flow very good in it. Thanks.

Beautifully written, powerful message.... you are very talented Nikki. Keep up the wonderful work.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

You have a real way with words! Amazing talent in all of your work! You are one of my favorite poets on here! Thank you for sharing with us!