Really great poem hun 5/5! keep writing it does help! u can make it if u try! im here 4 u if need someone to talk to! luv always maddison xxx

Great poem sweets:) I luff youse Ariel! It's beautiful. I love it. Keep it up babe. *hugs*

~Jessica

Like they said great poem i can really feel the emotion and i can relate like the scary kind of relate.awsome poem keep it up laterz.5/5

Sad sad poem... Great middle consistancy along with a touch of good trend... Loved the blacksheep line...
Keep on writing.... OR ELSE!

I love this poem..It's really emotional and i can relate to it keep up the good work 5/5

~Mallory

Great poem! keep it up girl!

Hey, ts really good and you expressed yourself well... Though I'm a pretty empathetic person, and I realize that your hurting a bit. Maybe not physically but you know what I mean. I just want you to take care of yourself, and no matter how much it all seems a joke, to just hold on to everything you have. Never give up. life is just a test and your gonna show it who's boss ;)

This is a great poem. You rally did this one up, I can't feel all the emoition in it. Keep up the good work. 5/5.
~J.T.~

OMG I LOVED IT BABE
Your great at this stuff infinetly/5 i loved it bunches
-Tess

Awwww, Wifey! That was a very emotional poem! Wow... I mean, you really know how to fill a poem with emotion. Great job hun! You are an awesome poet, keep it up :D. BTW, I am always here for you! You are muh wifey and I love you muches!!!!!! Don't you ever forget that, hun!
Love always,
~BJ~ (Your wifey)

Awww.. I love that.. it's so emotional and I feel that it comes from your heart. and you mean what you write.
~Shelby Lynn~

Hey Hunnie,
Great poem... Very long but great ! i loved it hun. 5/5
-Love Ashley

Wow, that was one long poem...lol Great write Ariel. I loved it. This was a very emotional poem. It flowed very nice, and overall it was awesome.

Good Job!!!

Peace, Joe