I will always notice you no matter if your wearing your mask or being the real you i will always notice cuz your my shining star shinging so bright through the dark

I can relate to this. It's a really good poem... I'd like to see some other ones by you.

Very nicely written. 5/5 none to less.
Keep writing and take care [always]

xx:

*> : PainOfOne

I realy love your poem, ive felt the same way my whole life...
keep up the good work

Julie xxx

I luv tha last stanza

Aww hun thats so sad, just remember all those times you were there for people, you know what they say..what goes around comes around" someone will be there for you too

I loved this poem...i can relate. keep writing!!

~5/5 Ali

This is beautiful! i <3 it. its so true. i can relate to what this says....

xo kisses xo

Nice poem 5/5.

Very nice write! i think you hit home with alot of people with this one! good luck and keep up the good work!
god bless

Nice <333

Related to every word. i felt every feeling you had. Stay strong :) xo

Wow, i can relate to all of that! It's tough at school for me cuz of all im going through but i hide it and im tired of it!
great poem