Raw, emotional and intense...I love your style and ability to pour out your heart through your pen....few people can do it with sincerity and make it real....awesome job!

This poem encompasses some outstanding imagery. It's written with so much passion and depth. Beautifully written! I especially like the last two stanza's. The ending is so powerful, keep it up~Holly

Omg..wow! that was truly amazing! u did not falter, or break for one minute! i love it! i read it, and it had perfect flow, perfect rhyme, and a great format! i love it! wow! i'm like..OMG that was soo good! ur such a great writer! i think i'm going to read more :)

10/5 lol i wish! 5/5

Nikki,

Deeply emotional and from the heart. Remember our little talk! Stay strong dear and you know what is the best way. Your friends all support you, all the way.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Nikki,
WOW!!!! This was a breathtaking piece
Beautifully written...loved each and every line...Perfection...just superb in every way....I'm speechless.....

hugs, love Ann

Very nice choise of words... It hasd a smashing pumpkins lirics like style to it, and they are also my inspiration...

Le Marquis

This is really poetic and beautiful
one of the best poems here i've read

Hey this poem is very very good..So so heart felt..Wonderful job...5/5 DEFINATELY!!
Crystal

:) Aww Thats So Sweet Danika! *Hugs* Love Ya! xoxo-Nikki- xoxo

Wow,
Really Deep Poem! Sadly to say I know How It Feels!!! Keep The Good Work COMING!!!

♥ Always,
Carrie

Great poem comment mine 5/5

Omg that is so preety i love it!!!

cici

Hey this is really good i really liked it!

I'm Glad You All Liked It, I Wrote This On a Moments Notice....I Didn't Like It Personaly And I'm Honored That You Guys Did *Hugs* You Guys Spoil Me With Compliments lol And I Love It xoxo-Nikk-xoxo

This is such a beautiful poem. So sincere and true, one you can tell came from the heart. you have such great word useage, i feel like i can relate so much and reading the last stanza it seems as if i can almost feel the rain.. this is a very excellent poem. I absolutly loved it. xxx~ hard2Heal

Very nice poem, very intese as well as emotional and thats coming from a guy! your poems are great, you better not stop. take a look at mine sometime if you can. i think that they could relate to you somehow.

David

Thats a vvery good poem!!! :D keep up the great work...

I really love ur use of words each one each line is really good, i just really like ur use of words great work xox rc

Om gosh, the moment I read this poem i fell in love with it! it was so good. I hope you feel better and heart no longer hurts. Great Job.

Hey, I relle luv ur style. u are a awesome writer!

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