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by jaki   Sep 27, 2005


The anger deep within
Burning me into tiny shreds
Tearing apart my soul
Turning it into hatred

The skies are black and dull
They\'re drinking up my tears
Savoring each taste
Creating whirlpools of black

The rain comes crashing down
Splashing crimson blood on my face
Making the fire within roar
Draining me of hope

Taking one step forward
And three steps back
Knowing life will go on like this
I cry my silent plead for help

The blood stains on my face
The tears across my wings
The emptiness from somewhere within
Remembering how you once cared

The rain keeps falling
The red stains turning to black
Removing the evidence of my suicide
Knowing I will always remember what you once were...

*an idea for a name would be very useful, thanks*

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    You write powerful stuff here!!! this one is again exellent. you have a great vocabulary, and that helps your poems flow so well

    Ruby