Ooo i know what it is like to get bullied the way i got them to stop was to ignore them and show it didn't harm me because it took their fun out of it. thie poem reminds me of the events of Columbine (such a sad event, for everyone!!) great poem, it looked kind of long but when i read it, it seemed to move on by so quickly i was surprised i reached the end so fast. wonderful job and my heart goes out to everyone who is bullied it's hard to deal with!

~Jacklyn

I agree with Jacklyn this did remind me of the Columbine!....Geesh This poem was so heartbreaking for me to read!! Let me start off first by giving you kudos to a brilliant write! Love the structure of this poem so much and the flow was just..mouth dropping!
Secondly..do not let these bullies get to you..I see more people get made fun of for being fat these days and it pisses me off...Your so beautiful in Gods eyes and in eyes of other people that actually know you...People will talk about you your whole life even for little things..I mean I'm not a heavy person but I have been made fun of for stupid things like "Chelsey you have no butt, you'll be alone with no husband when you get older"..or.."why do you wear something cute with just jeans and tennis shoes? Why aren't you dressed up?"..don't worry about it..you are you and you will have people love you for who you are and not for what you look like! I loved this poem Katie and I love ya girlie!!! 5/5 darlin'!
~Chelsey~

So touching . I've been a bigger girl all my life and the jokes are just not fun . And they don't just stop at childhood they carry with you forever . They can damage your self esteem and scar you for life . And the thing that irritates me the most is " you have such a pretty face " or you know the bigger girl
And sometimes I feel like shouting
Don't judge me by my body , don't judge me by my face .....judge me by my heart and soul .
Excellent piece my dear and I hope some people will learn to think before they spill hurt out of their mouths .

Wow!!!
i cant even describe how this made me feel. its..wow. it was soooo good and sounds like something that would happen.

Ohhh Wow, Columbine all over again.....I'm speechless Katie, don't know what to say!!! This was so painful to read and a bit scary....I was never bullied in school though I was the fat girl, so I don't know what it's like, I can only imagine how horrible it must be......I really felt you pain hun and I'm so sorry that this happened to you!!! I just hope that you won't go as crazy as your poems says =0) I love you girl and I'm here for you....

*Much love Sabrina*

Really really good poem, i can relate so much, xxxx

Katie,

I have always hated "bullies" and have stood my ground. This poem is so sad and to think about what people can do to each other for no real reasoning until the point of no return. People can be so mean and cruel sometimes.

Revenge is such a frightening prospect also. The poem is very powerful and it shows the story from both angles. But one should never let hatred rule one's heart, from then on only revenge will take root.

This was an awesome write, keep up your writing and use is as a tool for pressure release as I do. It is so much better and so much more rewarding. Kudos on an excellent job!

Warmest regards,

Steve

So Meaningful!
I get bullied and called names because of the way i look, and i wish people wouldn't judge me. They don't think about what they're hurtful names could do.
No-one deserves to be bullied.
How can people be so insecure that they have to take all they're anger and pain out on another innocent person?
Each and every one of us is beautiful in every way. The problem is most people don't see these treasures like friends and family do.
My friend's are fantastic, They tell me to ignore the bullies because i'm better than them. And so are you.
The day you let bullies get to you is the day you completely give up.
This write is so touching.
Well Done Katie
If you ever need to talk my email address is on my profile.
Love
Emmy xx

Great poem. Really strong and meaningful. Good stuff!

CrimsonTears

Wow....
very powerful

Wow this is such a powerful poem
it was amazing

Wow great poem darling...i have a similar poem..alomost lol..check it out maybe if ya want its called "a guy..and his gun"

love ya
5/5

-angel-

I really like this...i only have one on mine but i am gonna put more up soon

Deep stuff there. I'm so sorry these people are mean to you. Just remember, you are a hundred times better than they'll ever be. And you don't even have to proove anything to them. Be proud of who you are and be happy.

Excellent poem.

Wow! great one... I reminds me about a song from "Pearl Jam" called "Jeremy"

Le Marquis

But u dont need 2 kill people

Im in tears- both of sadness and awe, that was incredible, one of you best maybe, now i thought it was about youm which in some ways it is but the twist at the end was GREAT, i envy you so much, i wish i could write like you, that was truly stunning
love you
xxxxxxxxx

Very intese poem, keep up your work, you are heard well throughout this site as well known in my heart, your work is amazzing never stop.

david

Take a look at my poems sometimes if youd like.

david

:((( thats a very good poem!!! ignore the bullies ... what goes around comes around - u'll be surprised how well that works!