This is a really beautiful poem!

This poem was so emotional. I loved reading it and agian it had great rhyme and flow. You are so talented! I really enjoy reading your poems. 5/5

One of the best ideas I've ever read for a poem. Its not something Ive read a hundred times 5/5 excellent
one part did throw me off, the next to last stanza,
"A beauty in pain,
A soft laugh through the wind
I can hear your whisper
I can hear you sing."
Everything else rhymes/flows, except this one part.
It was still amazing, keep coming up w/ ideas like this.

This was just wow. I really liked this one. It was also great how you repeated the same stanza at the start and finish. It was really good. It all flowed well, And then rhyme scheme was great! You've done a great job, Theres not one thing I can find wrong with this piece. Honestly loved it. Hopefully I can read some more of your work soon. 5/5

`Taleee xx

Great poem, ending with the beginning was a nice symbolic tie in, and I thought the rhyming was well done. I don't have much along the lines of a critique for this one.

Another good poem. The only thing is.. the first stanza & last stanza, 'kept' and 'left' didn't rhyme. Maybe it's because we say it differently?.. haha, oh well.

A really good poem, and I liked the message you try to get across.

OMFG
that was the best poem ive read in SO long.
im going to read a few more of yours.
~Emah

Repetition of that stanza was really effective and made it so much more meaningful. well done1

I Love How The Lines In The Stanza Was Short Yet Meaningful, It Served To Be a Format That Was Well Suited..It Was Simply Beautiful 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

This poem reminds me kind of what me and my mom had to go through when my dad past. There was a sense of sadness but at the same time, there's joy knowing that one day we'll see him again. Your wording fits the situation and my feelings toward it perfectly.

I liked the repeatition of the 1st and final stanza it really brought the poem together.
I loved the hopeful quality that ra through this poem despite the sad theme.

Very strong ryminhg and rhythm, and i like therepetition of the first stanza at the end, a nice touch.

just a small suggestion... teh second to last stanza would be nice as 'i can hear YOU (instead of your)whisper, i can hear you sing'

-biscuit-