Him

by Liz   Sep 28, 2005


Passing through the hallways
Giving him a glance
Always walking slowly to give him a chance
To recognize or pay attention to me
Hoping that all my devoting he can't see
Passing through the hallways
Catching my breath as I walk
My voice getting trapped inside as if unable to talk
Dreaming of his enormous hazelnut eyes and his black shiny hair
Do I say a greeting do I dare?
Passing through the hallways
Giving a great sigh
Never showing my existence as he walks by

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  • 18 years ago

    by ♥LaUrEn♥

    Hey girl this is awsome! i love it i have one like that but it's called passing by him and it's different of course just keep up the good work!!♥

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    How many times have we all been in that situation? great poem great subject good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Aww that was so sweet, and i loved the rhyming, the flow was really good, and you did an awesome job, see the thing about the voting is its always inaccurate, i mean this poem should ATLEAST be a 4.6 rating, but since I gave it a 5/5, it only increased it to 4.2, but really it was an awesome poem, i'd give it a 10 if i could,