Never Gone

by Anthony   Sep 28, 2005


Staring at the drawing you drew,

I don't want to say that I miss you

Everytime I think I'm clear

Your voice just whispers in my ear

Just when I try to forget

You're in my mind to remind me yet

I try to drown out that voice within

That makes my life take that
unwanted spin

No matter just how hard I try

That voice reminds me that I too will die

I can't move on, I'm stuck in place

Angry because my problems just won't erase

This poets soul burns without fire

A reminder of where she hung with that wire

"I'll never leave you" That's what you said

And you havn't left me, even though you're dead.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    "Staring at the painting you drew,"

    Made me think of a certian someone, you know who, also, I didn't know you can draw a painting...you usually paint a painting. =P

    "Just when I try ti forget"

    Misspelled "to"

    "This poets soul burns without fire"

    My favourite line. =)

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aww hun, very beautiful poem & very touching, i loved it, it had a lot of meaning and it was easy to relate to, keep it up my dear you're an awesome writer

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    Ooooo I love it! "the poets soul burns without fire" --favorite line. Overall excellent poem, nothing to comment on besides its awesomeness.

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