Innocence

by Emma   Sep 29, 2005


Feel my pain
I hope To cut Deep in the Vain
I feel no need to explain

you made me like this
took my innocence in the mist
I tried to remember through a list

I wish to understand
Why did you Demand
I just Didn't know how to make a stand

You took my innocence
you are older you have more sense
You took my dreams and minced them.

I give you my life
it is a little price
compared to my innocence

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Once again, some sentances just dont fit. "i try to remember through a list" it makes it sound like you were simply finding any word that would rhyme. and then in the 4th stanza, the last line does not rhyme at all
    i loved the last stanza though"I give you my life
    it is a little price
    compared to my innocence"
    that finishes it off on a very melencoly fasion

    ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    Hmm i like it. Its different than anything else i have read. Good job.

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