What Just Happened?

by Emma   Jun 30, 2006


What just happened?
Did you just kiss me?
Does it mean anything?
Why did yo kiss me if you didn't mean it?

What just happened?
Did I fall for you?
Does that look mean anything?
Are you still in love with her?

What just happened?
Did we really cross that line?
Are we ready for this?
Are we really just friends?

What just happened?
Did we both fall?
Does it even matter?
Are we allowed to show that we are in love?

~~More feelings...I don't know a weird way of writing please tell me what you think...

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~Emma

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  • 17 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Good work. I really liked this poem. I like repetition of What just happened?
    'Why did yo kiss me if you didn't mean it?'
    I think you might have meant you instead of yo.

  • 17 years ago

    by holly

    I agree the flow is a little off but the repetition and continuos asking of questions made for a very effectve style. i really liked it and can definately relate
    xxALLYxx

  • 17 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    The flow is a little off though I like the thought of the poem! Umm I think you should go on longer give more feelings.....it was not near long enough

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Wow.. I enjoyed it. I loved how you wrote it, very unique. There was so much emotion put into this. The flow was pretty good.

    What just happened?
    Did I fall for you?
    Does that look mean anything?
    Are you still in love with her?
    ^^ I love this stanza, because I can relate to it so well. Great job! 5/5

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