Amazing poem.. it has a great message.. greatly written, theres not much more I can say about it aside that its beautiful,

This poem flowed nicely and made its point

Very nice read beautiful in every way thanks for letting in be shared

Very well written,the flow was diffrent but great!
I really did enjoy it.
It has a good message,and is unique in its own way.
Well done keep it up!
☼lisaness☼

So deep!
Is it about overweight?
If it is, the girl should have a mirror that shows the reflection of who she is inside, I'm sure its more beautiful there. People do have beautiful hearts, if they bother to try.

Good writing!
beth

Aw this is so sad and deep.....love it! 5/5

I loved this poem. Very well-written. 5/5